Rewrite the following sentences using vivid adjectives and avoiding slang and nonstandard English.

The horse ran fast as the other horses ran fast, too.

The sentence would be "The horse galloped swiftly as the other horses raced rapidly alongside"

The way the horse moves is described in a basic and repeated way using the word "fast" twice. It also includes informal language, like "ran fast," which may not be suitable for formal or academic writing.

So, I changed the sentence to make it more interesting and easier to understand by using strong words and not using informal language or words that are not proper English. "Galloped swiftly" gives us more specific and detailed information about how fast the horse was running. Also, I changed the words "ran fast" to "raced rapidly alongside. " This made the sentence more interesting and exciting.

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Which is a long-term consequence of paying less than the minimum amount due on your bills? There will be a late fee. You will get a fee for having a negative balance in your checking account. The number of payments will increase. It will be harder to get a good rate on a mortgage when you buy a house.

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After you’ve been ripped into shreds of organic molecules, the molecules themselves begin to feel the continually growing tidal forces. Eventually, they too snap apart, creating a stream of their constituent atoms. And then, of course, the atoms themselves snap apart, leaving an unrecognizable parade of particles that, minutes earlier, had been you.

But there is more bad news.

All parts of your body are moving toward the same spot — the black hole’s center. So while you’re getting ripped apart head to toe, you will also extrude through the fabric of space and time, like toothpaste squeezed through a tube.

To all the words in the English language that describe ways to die … we add the term “spaghettification.”

—“Death by Black Hole,”

What does the narrator mean when he writes that there was a wild inconsistency in the house

A morality play is a moral allegory in dramatic form. What characteristics make this play an allegory? the story about Everyman

What does the excerpt below tell you about the king's decision to marry the miller's daughter? The king came in the morning, and, finding all he wanted, was forced to keep his word; so he married the miller's daughter, and she really became queen. He didn't really want to marry her. He realized how much he loved her. He thought she would make a good queen. He admired that she was a hard worker.

For each sentence in the paragraph box below, replace the blank with an adjective that tells "how many."
1. _____ plants survived the cold weather.
2. She needed _____ people to volunteer.
3. In the aquarium were _____ fish.
4.The Arctic has been explored by _____ people.
5.I saw _____ camels at the circus.

Read the following sentence.

Leonardo da Vinci was enthralled by flying, so much so that he sketched flying machines, which were indeed ahead of their time, but if they had been built, they probably never would have flown in real life.

What is the main error in this sentence?

A.
length – The sentence should be broken into separate sentences to be more understandable.
B.
conciseness – The sentence has too many unnecessary adjectives and adverbs.
C.
order – This sentence contains misplaced modifiers.
D.
parallel structure – This sentence is not consistent with how the parts of speech are presented.

Im my last duchess by Robert browning how did the duchess displease the duke

. . . I was so determined not to try, not to be anybody different that I learned to play only the most ear-splitting preludes, the most discordant hymns. . . . For the talent show, I was to play a piece called "Pleading Child" from Schumann's Scenes from Childhood. It was a simple, moody piece that sounded more difficult than it was. I was supposed to memorize the whole thing, playing the repeat parts twice to make the piece sound longer. But I dawdled over it, playing a few bars and then cheating, looking up to see what notes followed. I never really listened to what I was playing. I daydreamed about being somewhere else, about being someone else. What does the narration in the excerpts reveal about Jing-mei's character? The song is much too difficult for Jing-mei, so she cannot concentrate no matter what she does. She thinks the talent show is a big joke and is not willing to work for it. She is trying her best, but she keeps getting distracted by her own imagination. She believes she cannot succeed even if she tries, so she doesn't bother to try.

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In three to five complete sentences, describe how the inhabitants of Mars felt about humans on earth. Use evidence from the text to support your answer.

No one would have believed in the last years of the nineteenth century that this world was being watched keenly and closely by intelligences greater than man's and yet as mortal as his own; that as men busied themselves about their various concerns they were scrutinised and studied, perhaps almost as narrowly as a man with a microscope might scrutinise the transient creatures that swarm and multiply in a drop of water. With infinite complacency men went to and fro over this globe about their little affairs, serene in their assurance of their empire over matter. It is possible that the infusoria under the microscope do the same. No one gave a thought to the older worlds of space as sources of human danger, or thought of them only to dismiss the idea of life upon them as impossible or improbable. It is curious to recall some of the mental habits of those departed days. At most terrestrial men fancied there might be other men upon Mars, perhaps inferior to themselves and ready to welcome a missionary enterprise. Yet across the gulf of space, minds that are to our minds as ours are to those of the beasts that perish, intellects vast and cool and unsympathetic, regarded this earth with envious eyes, and slowly and surely drew their plans against us. And early in the twentieth century came the great disillusionment.

Yet so vain is man, and so blinded by his vanity, that no writer, up to the very end of the nineteenth century, expressed any idea that intelligent life might have developed there far, or indeed at all, beyond its earthly level. Nor was it generally understood that since Mars is older than our earth, with scarcely a quarter of the superficial area and remoter from the sun, it necessarily follows that it is not only more distant from time's beginning but nearer its end.

The secular cooling that must someday overtake our planet has already gone far indeed with our neighbour. Its physical condition is still largely a mystery, but we know now that even in its equatorial region the midday temperature barely approaches that of our coldest winter. Its air is much more attenuated than ours, its oceans have shrunk until they cover but a third of its surface, and as its slow seasons change huge snowcaps gather and melt about either pole and periodically inundate its temperate zones. That last stage of exhaustion, which to us is still incredibly remote, has become a present-day problem for the inhabitants of Mars. The immediate pressure of necessity has brightened their intellects, enlarged their powers, and hardened their hearts. And looking across space with instruments, and intelligences such as we have scarcely dreamed of, they see, at its nearest distance only 35,000,000 of miles sunward of them, a morning star of hope, our own warmer planet, green with vegetation and grey with water, with a cloudy atmosphere eloquent of fertility, with glimpses through its drifting cloud wisps of broad stretches of populous country and narrow, navy-crowded seas.

And we men, the creatures who inhabit this earth, must be to them at least as alien and lowly as are the monkeys and lemurs to us. The intellectual side of man already admits that life is an incessant struggle for existence, and it would seem that this too is the belief of the minds upon Mars. Their world is far gone in its cooling and this world is still crowded with life, but crowded only with what they regard as inferior animals. To carry warfare sunward is, indeed, their only escape from the destruction that, generation after generation, creeps upon them.

Why is satire considered controversial?

A. Because it causes people to question their deeply held beliefs
B. Because it uses animals who display the same flaws as human beings
C. Because it tells a moral or lesson that not everyone will agree with
D. Because it offers a criticism of what some people consider to be sensitive issues

Which item would be considered a musician’s medium

is thrush a onomatopoeia

Which of the following best describes Lady Capulet?


1. She is calm and compassionate, but easily swayed by her husband.

2. She is strong but a little stubborn: she is comforting and kind to Juliet.

3. She is vengeful, bloodthirsty, and childish.

4. She is prone to vengeance and a little emotionally confused, but she backs her daughter through adversity.

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Read the excerpt from "Benin Plaque: The Oba with Europeans.”
All European visitors were struck by the Oba’s position as both the spiritual and the secular head of the kingdom, and the Benin brass plaques are principally concerned with praising him.
What context clue provides an antonym for the word secular? “visitors”
“spiritual”
“kingdom”
“concerned”

Why is romeo feeling cheerful at the beginning of scene i?

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Read the following quotation. Helping others is the key to happiness. Think carefully about this statement. Write an essay explaining your own ideas about the key to happiness. Be sure to— clearly state your thesis organize and develop your ideas effectively choose your words carefully edit your writing for grammar, mechanics, and spelling

Lobsters are invertebrates with a hard protective exoskeleton. Like most arthropods, lobsters must molt in order to grow, which leaves them vulnerable. During the molting process, several species change color. Lobsters have 10 walking legs; the front three pairs bear claws, the first of which are larger than the others. Although, like most other arthropods, lobsters are largely bilaterally symmetrical, some possess unequal, specialized claws. Lobsters, like snails and spiders, have blue blood due to the presence of haemocyanin which contains copper. Maybe there are other animals that have blue blood as well.
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Which sentence is unnecessary and could be eliminated without disturbing the flow and information of the paragraph?
A) Maybe there are other animals that have blue blood as well.
B) Lobsters are invertebrates with a hard protective exoskeleton.
C) Like most arthropods, lobsters must moult in order to grow, which leaves them vulnerable.
D) Lobsters, like snails and spiders, have blue blood due to the presence of haemocyanin which contains copper.

Read the sentence below and answer the following questions
please stop your incessant whining;it is not going to help your cause.
Use context to determine the meaning of incessant.
Soft
Pleasant
Unending
Well-founded

Would the events of the novel Lord of the Flies have happened the same way if it was all girls of the same ages stuck on the island in the exact same circumstances? Would it have gone differently? Explain your answer in a 5-point essay.

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Tone is shown through an author's

word choice


diction


dialogue


all of the above

Which statement summarizes this excerpt best? Cassius has recently become angrier with Brutus and is not willing to be the loving brother-in-law and friend he has always been. Cassius has noticed that lately Brutus seems to be angry with him instead of being the loving brother-in-law and friend he has always been. Brutus has noticed that Cassius seems to be angry with him, but Cassius denies that his feelings for Brutus have changed. Cassius is trying to convince Brutus that they are better friends than they really are in an effort to get closer to Caesar. Mark this and return

which information is not necessary to solve this story problem?addison had $80 to spend. she bought 5 cds and 3 magazines on saturday. on sunday, she bought 3 more magazines. she spent a total of $72.how much money did addison have left? a.number of cds and magazines addison bought b.amount of money addison spent c.amount of money addison had to spend

Which lines in this except from the poem consumption by William Cullen Bryant reflect the theme of the poem

Why don't the people on shore rescue the men?

What instrument is used to take readings at specied intervals for later review?

1. which phrase from the excerpt supports the idea that the rhythem of jazz music played an important role in kerouacs writing styles

2. which of the following choices best presents a counterclaim to the argument presented in this excerpt?

3. read the excerpt from Amy tans essage mouther tongue
which phrase from the excerpt uses informal English

Read these lines from the poem.

The pillow quakes and quivers

Like pudding on a plate.

How does the simile affect the meaning of this poem?


A.The speaker can’t sleep because the pillow is covered in cat hair.


B.The cat is purring because it ate pudding.


C.The cat is on the speaker’s pillow, moving around and purring, which keeps the speaker awake.


D.The speaker is restless and keeps shifting on the pillow and disturbing the cat.

How does the misplaced modifier in “I wished for happiness at the fountain” create confusion?

by making the order of events confusing to the reader
by suggesting that the person wanted happiness to be only at the fountain
by saying that there was no reason for the person to take longer than usual
by suggesting that the fountain wished the person happiness

How do cultural ideas about maleness and femaleness (masculine and feminine qualities) interact with ideas about language? You can consider everything from dialect speech and gender to ideas about male and female roles in the family or on the job and how this affects language usage.