Read this excerpt from a student’s analytical essay.

Tweedledee and Tweedledum are two crazy characters that Alice runs into as she goes through the Looking-Glass land.

Which is the best revision of this informal sentence?

I think Tweedledee and Tweedledum are two very unusual characters whom you would never, ever meet in the real world.
Tweedledee and Tweedledum are two characters who come to life after Alice recites a well-known nursery rhyme about them.
Tweedledee and Tweedledum are just crazy with the way they act and the nonsensical things they say to each other and to Alice.
Two of the more memorable characters whom Alice encounters during her journey through the Looking-Glass land are Tweedledee and Tweedledum.

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Answer 1

Answer:

Two of the more memorable characters whom Alice encounters during her journey through the Looking-Glass land are Tweedledee and Tweedledum.

Explanation:

The best revised sentence contains the same information as the original one, but in more formal, richer language: that Alice comes across Tweedledee and Tweedledum, who are very peculiar characters.

The rest of the choices are incorrect because they do not reflect with accuracy the meaning of the informal sentence, and not all of them are written in a formal register for an essay.

Answer 2

Answer:

d i did it

Explanation:


Related Questions

What type of verb is the BOLD word in the sentence? My brother BOUGHT a backpack to carry his books. A. intransitive B. transitive

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I believe it is A.......


Instructions:Select the correct text in the passage.
In this excerpt from "She Walks in Beauty" by Lord Byron, which phrases build up the theme of contrast and balance in beauty?

She walks in beauty, like the night
Of cloudless climes and starry skies;
And all that’s best of dark and bright
Meet in her aspect and her eyes;

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The phrases build up the theme of contrast and balance in beauty in this poem of Lord Byron are:

"And all that’s best of dark and bright  

Meet in her aspect and her eyes."

This lines seek to show that beauty is not always lights. In order for something to be beautiful, it has to have both positive and negative aspects. Nothing is fully good or fully bad, it has to posses a balance, an equilibrium in which all the parts come together to create a truly beautiful thing.

what will the maiden get if she will live with the shepherd ?

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Answer:

beds of roses, a thousand fragrant posies,   a cap of flowers, a kirtle embroidered leaves of myrtle, a gown made of the finest wool, fair lined slippers with buckles of the purest gold, a belt of straw and Ivy buds with coral clasps and amber studs

Explanation:

The shepherd promised to give the object of his affection things that he thought would make her happy such as fine clothing, slippers and accessories. He thought the lady would be enticed by things that would beautify her. He thought these things would give her pleasure.

CLASSIFYING SENTENCES BY STRUCTURE Classify each of the following sentences according to its structure. Decide whether the sentence is compound, complex, or compound-complex. Sometimes the air that is rushing in begins to rotate, and a tornado is formed.

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Final answer:

The sentence 'Sometimes the air that is rushing in begins to rotate, and a tornado is formed' is classified as a compound sentence. It contains two independent clauses joined by the coordinating conjunction 'and' without any subordinate clauses.

Explanation:

When classifying sentences by their structure, it's important to determine the number and types of clauses they contain. The sentence in question is 'Sometimes the air that is rushing in begins to rotate, and a tornado is formed.' This sentence is made up of two independent clauses: 'Sometimes the air that is rushing in begins to rotate' and 'a tornado is formed,' which are connected by a coordinating conjunction 'and.' There are no subordinate clauses present in this sentence, making it a compound sentence, not a complex or compound-complex sentence. According to the different ways that you can create compound sentences, such as through the use of coordinating conjunctions (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, or so), this sentence falls under that specific structure because it uses 'and' to connect the two independent clauses.

The sentence is complex because it comprises an independent clause ("Sometimes the air that is rushing in begins to rotate") and a dependent clause ("and a tornado is formed"). This structure demonstrates a relationship between the two clauses, with one being more dependent on the other for a complete thought.

The provided sentence, "Sometimes the air that is rushing in begins to rotate, and a tornado is formed," is a complex sentence. To understand this classification, let's break down the definitions of compound, complex, and compound-complex sentences.

A compound sentence consists of two or more independent clauses joined by a coordinating conjunction (such as "and," "but," or "or"). Each independent clause could stand alone as a complete sentence. An example would be: "The sun was shining, and the birds were singing."

A complex sentence has one independent clause and at least one dependent clause. A dependent clause is not a complete thought and relies on the independent clause to form a complete sentence. In the given sentence, "Sometimes the air that is rushing in begins to rotate" is the independent clause, and "and a tornado is formed" is a dependent clause.

A compound-complex sentence is a combination of a compound and a complex sentence. It includes multiple independent clauses and at least one dependent clause. Your sentence doesn't fall into this category as it contains only one independent clause and one dependent clause.


I am offering this poem to you,
since I have nothing else to give.
Keep it like a warm coat
when winter comes to cover you,
or like a pair of thick socks
the cold cannot bite through,
I love you,
I have nothing else to give you,
so it is a pot full of yellow corn
to warm your belly in winter,
it is a scarf for your head, to wear
over your hair, to tie up around your face,
I love you,
Keep it, treasure this as you would
if you were lost, needing direction,
in the wilderness life becomes when mature;
and in the corner of your drawer,
tucked away like a cabin or hogan
in dense trees, come knocking,
and I will answer, give you directions,
and let you warm yourself by this fire,
rest by this fire, and make you feel safe
I love you,
It's all I have to give,
and all anyone needs to live,
and to go on living inside,
In the poem, which of the following images is being compared to a poem?

A. Dense trees
B. Thick socks
C. Winter nights
D. An uncaring world

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I would say the answer is B) Thick socks. He says "Keep it like a warm coat when winter comes to cover you, or like a pair of thick socks." He is comparing the poem to thick socks. He is saying keep it when you need encouragment.
~Deceptiøn
The answer is B. In the poem, he says Keep it like a warm coat, when winter comes to cover you, or like a pair of thick socks the cold cannot bite through. From this passage, we can see the comparison of socks to the poem, so thick socks is the answer.

Which sentence uses a comma correctly?
A )Until the next meeting, we should focus on selecting music. B) We have made many decisions, we need to make a few more.
C ) The party will, not go forward, unless we can come to an agreement.
D ) In the beginning, of this process we had more patience for each other.

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Hey there!

A comma is used to indicate a breif stop in the beginning of a sentence, usually to provide drama or emphasis on certain parts of the sentence. For example:

My favorite foods are apples, (stop), oranges, (stop), and pears(stop).

Let's start from D. We'll write it with stops and determine whether it makes sense by reading it aloud:

"In the beginning(stop) of this process we had more patience for each other.

This is incorrect, as you should not stop after saying "in the beginning".


For C:

"The party will(stop) not go forward (stop) unless we can come to an agreement."

This too is incorrect. Stopping after "the party will", and again after "not go forward", doesn't sound grammatically correct.

For B:

"We have made many decisions (stop) we need to make a few more."

Reading this aloud, we notice an immediate mistake. Stopping after decisions doesn't make any sense, and in order to illustrate that intended "and we need to make a few more", a semicolon (;) would make more sense.

For A:

"Until the next meeting(Stop), we should focus on selecting music."

This one is grammatically correct. It correctly demonstrates a stop after the word meeting, just like used in regular oral and sentence speaking.

Hope this helps!


A) Until the next meeting, we should focus on selecting music.

___________________ refers to the reason(s) the characters act the way they do. a. Internal conflict c. Characterization b. External conflict d. Motivation

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Motivation refers to the reason(s) the characters act the way they do.
The correct answer is D. motivation.
Motivation is the cause of characters' behaviors within a text. They might be motivated to do bad or good things, depending on their goals and characterizations. An internal conflict is conflict with yourself, an external conflict is conflict with another person/society/nature, and characterization refers to qualities that a character has.

And Spring herself, when she woke at dawn,
Would scarcely know that we were gone.


Which figurative device is used in the final two lines of this poem?

A)
hyperbole


B)
metaphor


C)
personification


D)
simile

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Hi!

The answer would be C) personification because her dreams are being given human characteristics 

Answer:

C) personification

Explanation:

Why does Rama give Sugriva a necklace made of flowers?

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To tell him apart from bali. 

Answer:

To tell him apart from Baali.

Explanation:

Sugriva (or Sugreeva) and Bali are two brothers that appear in the Ramayana. Baali was the older brother, while Sugriva was younger. They are both sons of Riksh Raaj, who was turned into a woman. He became a beautiful woman, and both Soorya and Indra wanted to have her. As they did, Baali was fathered by Indra, while Sugriva was fathered by Soorya. Rama gives Sugriva a necklace made of flowers in order to tell him apart from Baali.

According to Hamlet Fortibras is an admirable man. how does the sight of Fortinbras and his troops change hamlets attitude

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Hamlet sees Fortinbras and his troops--twenty thousand soldiers--ready to lay down their lives for a plot of land that means nothing to them. When he sees this he realizes that if so many men are willing to die for something basically worthless, he is even more of a coward than he thought because he won't even fight to avenge his father's murder. He becomes disgusted with himself in his soliloquy at the end of this scene and vows to take action. This is Hamlet's major shift in the play: he says, at the end "my thoughts be bloody, or be nothing worth", and from this point on in the play he becomes more ruthless (getting Rosencrantz and Guildenstern killed to start) and goal-oriented towards killing Claudius.

Fortinbras is presented in the play as Hamlet's foil. This means that he is a character that embodies everything that Hamlet is not. Hamlet himself is aware of this. While Hamlet feels compelled to avenge his father's murder, he is plagued with indecision, and this leads him to delay taking action. On the other hand, Fortinbras is brave and decisive, and he is not scared to die in order to regain his father's holdings. Hamlet admires this attitude, and this is the thing that motivates him to be different and become more bold and decisive.

The imagery of “Song of Becoming” alludes to ________

A. hope for reconciliation
B. a life of innocence
C. past violence
D. complete submission of fate

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The answer is:

C. past violence

Answer: C. past violence

Although the poem "Song of Becoming" never explicitly states who the children are, or what specific things they have done, it does allude to some past violence. The poem states that their voices "are ones that reject, that knock down and build anew." It also tells us that they invade classrooms, streets and city quarters, "facing sullen tanks with streams of stones." The imagery of the poem shows that these people have engaged in acts of violence in the past.

Carla began to connect more with her peers than her family – I’m sure you have seen this in your community. Youths often prefer the company of their friends, seeking them out at the pool, the park, the mall. They no longer seek shelter behind mothers and fathers, you understand. Instead, they venture boldly into new social circles.

Which statement describes the narrative voice of this paragraph?

The paragraph has a first-person narrator offering thoughts and feelings.
The paragraph has a second-person narrator addressing the reader.
The paragraph has a third-person narrator sharing observations.
The paragraph has an omniscient narrator with knowledge of the future.

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Answer: B) The paragraph has a second-person narrator addressing the reader.

Explanation: When writing, an author can chose which type of narrator (or point of view) he or she wants to use, depending on the effect they want to cause on the audience. In the given paragraph we can see an example of a second-person narrator (it uses the pronoun "you" for example: " I’m sure you have seen this in your community") and with the use of this perspective, the author addresses the reader directly (for example: "you understand").

Answer:

b

Explanation:

b

Write a single scene that uses rich description to build suspense. Use vivid imagery that conveys elements of the supernatural in order to present a single, suspenseful moment to your readers. PLEASE HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!

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In my opinion, the best way to approach writing a scene like this is to imagine it first. Imagine what is happening. The question says there must be a "suspenseful moment," so think of some situation that would be very tense and dramatic, something like a life-or-death moment or a heated argument. Now freeze that moment in your mind and look at it. Describe where your characters are, what they look like, and what they're doing in this moment. Your question also says to incorporate elements of the supernatural into your scene. Think about what that means to you and what supernatural elements might be included with what else is going on. I think once you get your imagination going, you will be able to picture it perfectly. Then you just have to write what you see in your mind's eye.

"intense, unexpected suffering passes more quickly than suffering that is apparently bearable; the latter goes on for years and without our noticing, eats away at our soul"

The writer uses __

A) Personification
B) Hyperbole
C) A simile
D) A metaphor

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hyperbole because it says "eats away at our soul", that's an exaggeration.

In the provided statement, the writer uses personification by attributing human-like qualities to the abstract concept of suffering, suggesting it can actively eat away at someone's soul. Hence the correct option is A.

The writer uses personification in the statement, "intense, unexpected suffering passes more quickly than suffering that is apparently bearable; the latter goes on for years and without our noticing, eats away at our soul." By saying that suffering "eats away at our soul," the writer is giving human-like qualities to the abstract concept of suffering, as if it has the ability to consume one's soul actively. This is a figurative way of describing the impact prolonged suffering can have on a person's inner being.

What is the best way to punctuate the bolded portion of the quotation?

“The car keeps overheating” she explained to the mechanic.


keeps overheating’

keeps overheating,”

keeps overheating

keeps overheating,

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keeps overheating," I hope that helps

one effective way to develop your own personal writing style is to

A) avoid uncommon punctuation

B) read the works of expert authors

C) restrict your language as much as possible

D) keep the same set of characters in your writing

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Hi!

The answer is B) read the works of expert authors

This would be an excellent way to improve your own writing skills because you can apply the same style of writing that people who are already an expert in such a field have mastered.
Short Answer B<<<<==== 

If you think it is D, then pretty soon you will be in a rut, unless these characters meet other characters. Then it's fine. Series of novels written by women quite commonly do this. The main character of one novel will become a minor character in another.

Never restrict your language. It is just about the worst thing you can do.

Punctuation is a very minor part of writing style. Be sure and use standard punctuation. Punctuation always aids a reader. Weird punctuation is not a good idea.

We're left with reading expert authors. You want to do this to allow yourself to appreciate what you are reading. Good language flows and good characters handled by experts become our friends and guides while we read about them. The more you appreciate good writing, the more you will want to find your own voice.

Which sentence from "Icarus and Daedalus" supports the idea that Icarus is reckless?

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The sentence that shows that Icarus is reckless is "Who could remember to be careful when he was to fly for the first time?" Reckless is the opposite of careful. When Icarus was told to be careful, he did not even listened to his father as shown in the preceding sentence: "For Icarus, these cautions went in at one ear and out by the other."

People aged 18 and under should have a nightly curfew at 10 p.m. because they need more sleep than adults and the majority of violent crimes against youth occur after 10 p.m.



What do you expect to read in an essay with this thesis statement?

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C). A Section On Sleep And  A Section On Violent Crimes Is The Right Answer.

After reading this thesis statement, the reader should be able to find an explanation on why is sleep more necessary in teenagers than in adults; this explanation should be backed up with reliable sources. Moreover, the essay should also include statistics to prove the statement that affirms that the majority of violent crimes against youth occur after 10pm; it should provides examples of the type of violent crimes, and it should present a direct relation of the crimes to the fact of being out after 10pm.

Read the following excerpt from The Great Gatsby:"Anyhow, he gives large parties," said Jordan, changing the subject with an urban distaste for the concrete. "And I like large parties. They're so intimate. At small parties there isn't any privacy."Which literary device does this passage best exemplify? A.Understatement B.Paradox C.Sarcasm D.Hyperbole

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the answer is B: paradox

The correct answer on APEX is Paradox.

What does sitting at the table represent in Langston Hughes’s poem "I, Too"? Cite specific evidence from the text to support your analysis.

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The speaker feels that a seat at the table is a place of dignity. By not allowing him to sit at the table, the other guests show that they do not respect him or view him as an equal.Consider the first line in “I Hear America Singing”:I hear America singing, the varied carols I hear.In the context of the entire poem, how does this line illuminate the speaker’s view of the American identity? Cite specific textual evidence to support your analysis.The speaker envisions the American identity as unifed yet diverse

Answer:

The speaker feels that a seat at the table is a place of dignity. By not allowing him to sit at the table, the other guests show that they do not respect him or view him as an equal.

Explanation: PLATO USERS

My dad always says, "Time is money".
Question 11 options:

Irony

Idiom

Pun

Metaphor

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The answer is an idiom.

Near the garden was a tiny brown rabbit. Which best identifies the type of sentence a.compound b.simple c.compound-complex d.complex

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The answer I think is either a compound sentence or a simple sentence

compound sentence = a sentence with more than one subject or predicate.

simple sentence=
a sentence consisting of only one clause, with a single subject and predicate.


I can also give you the definition of clause and subject or predicate Hope this helps ;)




A Simple Sentance Definitely 

Which sentence shows INCORRECT use of subject-verb agreement? A) The committee arrives at the meeting one at a time. B) The audience claps its approval at the political rally. C) The entire Congress voted unanimously to repeal the law. D) The team members yells at one another to keep their momentum going during half-time.

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C
I’m not 100%Sure tho
INCORRECT use of subject-verb agreement: D) The team members yells at one another to keep their momentum going during half-time.

members - plural, yells - singular

Which is expressed with the MOST concise language?

A. The tardy policy should be revoked.
B. We need to plan ahead for our field trip.
C. The students protested against the tardy policy.
D. The end result is a short story about an elephant.

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The most concise language is used in the statement "The tardy policy should be revoked" (A), because it is brief, clear, and tells the reader what the subject is, and what must be done with it. 

B does not get to the point of what needs to be planned for the field trip

C Does not say what about the policy the students are protesting again

D Does not explain what the short story about an elephant is the end result of. 

Answer:

A

Explanation:

The tardy policy should be revoked. This sentence is expressed with concise language. The remaining answer choices have redundancy: protested against; plan ahead; end results.

the elbow of my favorite shirt are completely soiled with soil. how do you define of the bold word is dirty

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soiled is a verb form. completely modifies soiled. Soiled means dirty. It's hard to make out what exactly you have written.

The answer is: The word completely is an adverb modifying an adjective

Which technique is Jude most clearly using in the following discussion?

JUDE:
The author is talking about baseball players who have gone on strike over salary disputes. He claims they should be stripped of all their titles, even though the titles had been earned while they were playing under contract. Do you think he makes a strong case?

CARLY:
I never watch baseball, so I don't know too much about it.

JUDE:
That's O.K. We're not really talking about baseball. We're just talking about the author's ability to support his claim.
A. Using evidence
B. Confirming the question
C. Making an objective
D. Synthesizing ideas

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c making an objective 

Answer:

C. Making an objective.

Explanation:

In this passage, Jude is most clearly using the technique of making an objective. First, Jude tells Carly that the main question to answer is whether the author is making a strong case. Afterwards, she also tells Carly that they need to establish whether the author is properly supporting his claim. In both cases, Jude is making an objective.

A multimedia presentation is _____
a)  a public meeting place, an open discussion, or any medium such as a newspaper or website designed for the expression of ideas.
b) the material or technical process used in communicating or creating something.
c) a means for clarifying important points through the use of photographs.
d) a technique used to share information by enhancing narration with print sources and nonprint media.

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d) a technique used to share information by enhancing narration with print sources and nonprint media.

A multimedia presentation is a presentation that uses multimedia. Multimedia is a technique that uses different media (multi means different) such as writing, image, video, and audio, to convey a message. This technique is used as a tool that allows the enhancing of the narration, as different media can be used to enhance different levels of comprehension, or can suggest new links and connections with other materials.

What two conditions make up the setting of a short story?

Study guide question, please help.

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Don't worry! 
The answer is time and place because a setting is a place right?
and the time,, it basically means like what year or hour the story is taking place in.

hope this helped!!!!
A short story is a type of story.  What is the basis of any story?  Well, honestly, it would be the plot, summary of plot, etc.  So, the name or the setting that the story takes place and characters.  Maybe, I'm in high school and we probably addressed this long ago.  I'm sorry, but hope this helps.

1. Ralph is planning an essay about the rights of veterans to receive support. Which of the following would be a strong supporting detail for his paragraph?
A. As a young boy, I saw many vets who were homeless.
B. When people are not medicated, they can become dangerous to others.
C. Everyone deserves to have help from the government if they need it.
D. Veterans are in need of counseling and medical support.
2. Harold is planning a paragraph comparing the behavior of kids when he was growing up to kids' behavior today. Here is the beginning of his planning:
different clothes
social media. Which of the following would be a good addition Harold's plan?
A. personal parenting story
B. respect for teachers
C. changes in parenting styles
D. less qualified teachers
3. Nancy has become exhausted with Bill's lack of help around the house. She is going to confront him and is working on the main points for her talk with him:

-Your behavior is annoying and immature
-I don't have time to finish everything alone.
-It would take less time to do together.
-It won't take more than 20 minutes of your time.
How should Nancy revise her points to better support her argument?
A. Remove "I don't have time to finish everything alone."
B. No revisions are needed; all her points are strong supporting details.
C. Remove "Your behavior is annoying and immature."
D. Remove "It would take less time to do together."
4. Kim has been asked to work on a proposal for keeping the arts and music programs at her school funded. Below are her ideas.

Art and music programs enhance creativity.
Funding isn't being cut for sports.
Learning about art and music is part of getting a well-rounded education.
Cutting art and music programs would forever tarnish the school's reputation.
Which of these ideas is the least effective supporting detail?
A. Art and music programs enhance creativity.
B. Cutting art and music programs would forever tarnish the school's reputation.
C. Learning about art and music is part of getting a well-rounded education.
D. Funding isn't being cut for sports.
5. The president of an internet security company is writing a memo to his sales department; his purpose is to explain the upgrades so that sales representatives can effectively tell new and continuing customers.
Which of the following statements should not be included as a main point in the memo?
A. It has been updated to detect and prevent more breaches.
B. It is pretty much the same as the old product.
C. It represents the start of a more frequent, free upgrade cycle.
D. The interface is easier to navigate.

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1. The answer is C

2. Answer is A

3. Answer is D

4. Answer is D

5. Answer is B

Following are the correct options:

1. C is the correct option.

2. A is the correct option.

3. D is the correct option.

4. D is the correct option.

5. B is the correct option.

What is paragraph writing?

Paragraph refers to a collection of sentences about a specific subject. As practically everything we write, including answers, essays, stories, emails, etc. is written in paragraphs.

We might say that the foundation of successful writing is a well-structured paragraph. The paragraph's objectives are to provide information, explain something, create story, and persuade the reader that our notion is sound.  A longer piece of writing, such as stories, novels, essays, creative writing, or professional writing, is segmented into paragraphs to make it easier to read and comprehend.

Therefore, we can conclude that above are the correct options of Ralph's essay writing plan.

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(1) In the winter of 1980, Dr. Keith Farrow and Emily Lane, a professor and a graduate student at Hickory College, they began to discuss turning a parcel of land on the west side of campus into an arboretum. (2) This was around the time that the United States men’s ice hockey team shocked the world by winning the gold medal in the Winter Olympics in Lake Placid. (3) A grove of sycamore trees on the land was plagued with disease. (4) It was also in a state of serious neglect. (5) Few people held out much hope that any of the trees in the grove could be saved. (6) Dr. Farrow and Mrs. Lane, however, formed a committee devoted to doing just that and, to everyone’s surprise and delight, were awarded a grant from the EPA to save the grove and establish the arboretum. (7) In 1981, a fundraising drive was begun by the Hickory College Green Thumb Club to raise additional money for the project.

(8) Meanwhile, Dr. Farrow and Mrs. Lane began to use their grant money to try to salvage some of the sycamore trees. (9) Their efforts were fairly successful; only six trees could not be saved. (10) The Green Thumb Club then divided the land formerly occupied by the dead trees into small plots. (11) These plots were used for organic gardening. (12) By the summer of 1982, the newly named McCauley Arboretum was up and running. (13) Today it is one of Hickory College’s most beloved campus features.

Which of the following sentences does not belong in the first paragraph of the passage?


Sentence 3

Sentence 1

Sentence 2

Sentence 5

Sentence 4

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The purpose of this paragraph is to discuss the development of the McCauley Arboretum. Those sentences that discuss the origins as well as the development of the arboretum are necessary to the passage.

Let's look at the first paragraph in further detail.

(1) In the winter of 1980, Dr. Keith Farrow and Emily Lane, a professor and a graduate student at Hickory College, they began to discuss turning a parcel of land on the west side of campus into an arboretum. 
-- This sentence is necessary to understanding the origins of the arboretum and should not be removed the paragraph.

(2) This was around the time that the United States men’s ice hockey team shocked the world by winning the gold medal in the Winter Olympics in Lake Placid.
-- This point, while certainly interesting, is not necessary to understanding either the origins or the development of the arboretum.

(3) A grove of sycamore trees on the land was plagued with disease.
 -- This sentence tells us about the parcel of land used for the arboretum.

(4) It was also in a state of serious neglect.
-- This sentence also provides further details about the land used for the arboretum.

(5) Few people held out much hope that any of the trees in the grove could be saved.
 -- This sentences indicates that many thought the land would not be good for anything.

(6) Dr. Farrow and Mrs. Lane, however, formed a committee devoted to doing just that and, to everyone’s surprise and delight, were awarded a grant from the EPA to save the grove and establish the arboretum.
 -- This sentence proves the importance of the previous two sentences. Although the land was in a state of neglect and many thought the trees could not be saved, Farrow and Lane were able to turn the land around.

(7) In 1981, a fundraising drive was begun by the Hickory College Green Thumb Club to raise additional money for the project.
-- This sentence provides further information about the project begun by Farrow and Lane.

Therefore, Sentence 2 is not necessary to the paragraph's main idea and should be removed.

Final answer:

As per the given passage, sentence 2, regarding the U.S. men's ice hockey team, does not belong to the first paragraph as it is unrelated to the main topic of creating an arboretum.

Explanation:

The sentence that does not belong in the first paragraph of the passage is Sentence 2. This sentence about the United States men's ice hockey team is unrelated to the main topic of the paragraph, which is the establishment of an arboretum. The other sentences all directly relate to the creation, challenging circumstances, and eventual success of the arboretum project led by Dr. Farrow and Mrs. Lane.

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